Aimee and Zalia dialogue #2

We made this dialogue because we like two character stories and what happens in them. Have we used dialogue correctly in this story?

Staring:Cat(Aimee)

and Turtle (Zalia)

Turtle:

“How you doing Cat?” Asked the Turtle

Cat:

*snoring*

Turtle:

“CAT WAKE UP I’M TALKING TO YOU!!!!!” Yelled the Turtle

Cat:

“OH, sorry ” Yawned the Cat

Turtle:

“I was trying to say, let’s go for a walk around the block because you definitely need to get some exercise”

Cat:

“UGH do I have to?!” mumbled the Cat

Turtle:

“Yes you do now hurry up!!!” urged the Turtle

Cat:

“OK, Ok  just  stop talking”

Turtle:

“Okay then let's go” said the Turtle excitedly.

The Cat picked up the turtle and rested him on her back they then trotted out for a walk, after they were done they headed back home and ate, after they had finished eating they fell asleep together.

THE END

By Aimee and Zalia