Aimee and Zalia dialogue #2

We made this dialogue because we like two character stories and what happens in them. Have we used dialogue correctly in this story?

Staring:Cat(Aimee)

and Turtle (Zalia)

Turtle:

“How you doing Cat?” Asked the Turtle

Cat:

*snoring*

Turtle:

“CAT WAKE UP I’M TALKING TO YOU!!!!!” Yelled the Turtle

Cat:

“OH, sorry ” Yawned the Cat

Turtle:

“I was trying to say, let’s go for a walk around the block because you definitely need to get some exercise”

Cat:

“UGH do I have to?!” mumbled the Cat

Turtle:

“Yes you do now hurry up!!!” urged the Turtle

Cat:

“OK, Ok  just  stop talking”

Turtle:

“Okay then let's go” said the Turtle excitedly.

The Cat picked up the turtle and rested him on her back they then trotted out for a walk, after they were done they headed back home and ate, after they had finished eating they fell asleep together.

THE END

By Aimee and Zalia

WIT is done

                           WIT
         I'm finished:)!!!

For my wit we did a slideshow. Our wit was based on

identifying invertebrates in the Frankley School Bush.Ashley and Zalia were in my group. Our task was to make a child-friendly resource.We made up to 26
slides at least so that our target group could observe and be taken to a number of possible links.  They thought that it was pretty cool.I thought our group did very good.Sometimes my group would be away and so I had to work by myself but that was fine, as I am an independent learner and followed comments from the teachers.

Cross Country

Cross country

For cross country I raced in the 10/11

Year old Competitive girls race. For training I ran up to the cemetery. Running up the cemetery

Is fun. In cross country I came 5th.

I was so tired after my race I had the stitch.My goal for next year is to try to come 1/2 or 3.

aimee Zalia dialogue

NORTH AMERICAN.

1. 1.
2. take part in a conversation or discussion to resolve a problem.
3. "he stated that he wasn't going to dialogue with the guerrillas"

Pineapple

“Are you okay?” Asked the pineapple

Chinchilla

“Why do you say that?” Answered the Chinchilla

Pineapple

Pineapple shouted, “Because you just drank my friend!!!”

Chinchilla

“Oh I promise it was a mistake” “SORRY.” Begged the Chinchilla

Pineapple

“Well come on then we need to get him to a hospital or something.” Panicked Pineapple

Chinchilla

“OK fine let’s go.” Mumbled Chinchilla

Soon after Pineapples friend had gotten surgery and all sowed up he…

DIED

THE END.

Limericks Poem

There once was a beautiful girl 
Who had a kangaroo named Pearl 
She put her in a car 
And then drove really far 
Until they fell into a swirl.

Symmetry In Kowhaiwhai

My Holiday in Vanuatu

My writing goal is to spell the essential words correctly in my writing.

I went to Vanuatu we stayed at Iririki island with Mum,Bill, Connor, Corbin, Ben, Lucas, Nana, Poppa and leons. we kayaked around iririki island. Me and Bill went snorkeling 15 feet deep we also took some bread and feed all the fish we saw nemo and dory it was so fun. For dinner the first night we all went to a restaurant on the main island port vela. Me Mum,Bill, Connor, Corbin and Ben went ziplining through the jungle while nana,poppa and lucas were at the main island. We went over same water and we all got a shirt. I also went swimming under a ginormous stunning water full i jumped off of a platform. Me,mum,Bill,Ben Connor and Corbin went snorkeling at hideaway island there was an under water post office so we sent a card home the card arrived on friday the 27 of July. We also visited a school and gave them some colored paper and colored pencils they sang a song it was great. In that same day we also went to eton beach Bill went snorkeling while we found shells and hermit crabs then we all went to blue lagoon there was a rope that you swig off of and into the clear water I went so high it was fabulous. I went to the markets and got my hair braided I got a shirt with a turtle on it the turtle was paid I also got a bracelet it's a chain with rainbow string threaded through it. I went to a turtle exhibit with 8 months old toddlers and 60 year old turtles.

8 months old turtles

snorkel cove 

me holding a lizard

irirki island

turtles that are 8 months old

turtles 60 year olds

coconut crab

markets

                                                             

cascading water fall

shark

pool